hi, i know maybe this one is your rough idea. Will you refine more on the girl and the rabbit? to add in some details for the girl and rabbit. For the right panal, maybe the date September... you do not need to state, but just state Mid Autumn Festival blah blah (put in your statement there).
I dont see any calendar table? Will you put in? in the calendar, you only highlight the particular date in SEPTEMBER.
The clouds riding by the girl and rabbit should be well defined rather than a black blurred spot, let them riding on the blue curly cloud, as you drawn in the right panel.
Suggestion: maybe you do not have to put the right panel with RED background. Your moon in the right panal can be the moon for the whole illustration, the big bright rounded moon is well drawn, and should replace the white moon lah. What do you think. Overall layout... maybe you can just put the calendar number / days at the lower part of your calendar and do not put it within your picture/illustration of the girl, rabbit, and moon. Anyway, this is just a suggestion.
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hi, i know maybe this one is your rough idea. Will you refine more on the girl and the rabbit? to add in some details for the girl and rabbit. For the right panal, maybe the date September... you do not need to state, but just state Mid Autumn Festival blah blah (put in your statement there).
I dont see any calendar table? Will you put in? in the calendar, you only highlight the particular date in SEPTEMBER.
The clouds riding by the girl and rabbit should be well defined rather than a black blurred spot, let them riding on the blue curly cloud, as you drawn in the right panel.
Suggestion: maybe you do not have to put the right panel with RED background. Your moon in the right panal can be the moon for the whole illustration, the big bright rounded moon is well drawn, and should replace the white moon lah. What do you think. Overall layout... maybe you can just put the calendar number / days at the lower part of your calendar and do not put it within your picture/illustration of the girl, rabbit, and moon. Anyway, this is just a suggestion.
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